Dear ----

Most companies today use paper packaging to package their products. As a paper packaging manufacturer we specialize in the design, production, and printing of various low to middle-grade corrugated boxes, cartons, color boxes, paper angle protectors, honeycomb cartons, paper pallets, paperboards, and mesh bags, among others.

If you are interested in any of our products, do not hesitate to contact me. We would be happy to send you free samples for your evaluation.

Thank you for considering our company.

Best regards。

Abner

********** Co., LTD

Tel: 86-*******

Fax: 86-*******

[email]*******[/email]

除了首句话的“most of companies”应该改为 “most companies”，其他没有明显的语法或用法错误。建议在发信之前仔细检查一遍以避免疏漏。

Dear Sir

He a nice day!

Do you need a reliable supplier for your products package? As a professional manufacturer of paper package, we are able to provide best products at competitive price. Here enclose some pictures of our paper package for your reference. If needed, free samples can be sent to you. We are sincerely to cooperate with you. Any other questions, pls contact me freely.

Best Regards

XXX

大概意思就是这样吧， 你自己看看，有产品图片的话可以付上一些图片。。 其实有一些语法错误也是没关系的 他们老外自己还经常一堆错误呢 又不是每个老外英语都很好的

非常感谢，能有贴吧人的肯定，我这信心倍增啊！

感谢批评，我改改在发上来

感谢各位大神给点宝贵意见，有没有语法、用词、语气、句型什么的错误啊？这是我第一次自己写，还找了别的参照，真心不会啊，希望跟各位大神好好学习。

要不你要写什么内容直接用中文让7楼帮你翻译吧！

看到想自杀。我的英语够差了还能看出来你的问题。

As a professional manufacturer with paper packaging .好像whit在这里用的是不对的。

调转一下变成As a professional paper packaging manufacturer应该会还好点，或是直接 As a professional paper packaging .

we good at ，别那么节省，be good at固定搭配。

do not hesitate to contact me 不要犹豫与我吗？ please contact me immediately ，这个可能更通顺简单。

FREE SAMPLES will be sent for your evaluation 这句似乎也不行。样品发送给你的评价？

虽然是刚入行，但是由于之前是学物流专业的，专业英语还是有学的。看了你这个文章，突然发现自己放下太久，看着单词都是熟悉的，居然想不起来，这真的是提醒我要好好复习一下了。可惜书不在身边啊！

我英语也不还很好，但是你有些顺序还是颠倒了。

建议，写信给客户简单明了吧！

我的英语很差，四级还没过呢，这个月再考一次，￣□￣｜｜

能跟我说哪个地方颠倒了吗？还有，7楼我改过的这个还有没有毛病？

非常感谢

你这个。。。很次

Paper packaging is used by most of companies to package their products today.废话

We are manufacturer specialize in Paper packaging. 语法不通，一个句子两个结构

Designingproduction,printing will be done well with all kinds of low middle-grade corrugated boxes, cartons, color boxes, paper angle protector, honeycomb carton, paper pallets, paper board and mesh bag etc. 看的戳眼睛 ，建议直接砍掉。

If anything is interested to you, do not hesitate to contact me. FREE SAMPLES will be sent for your evaluation!

东西对

Dear----

As a professional manufacturer with paper packaging, we good at designing,production,printing.

If any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. FREE SAMPLES will be sent for your evaluation!

Thanks & best regards。

Abner

现在呢？是不没有重点啊？客人会注意并切打看吗？