deciding to rescind the earlier estimate our report was updated to include $40,000 for new equipment.”
应改为 deciding to rescind our earlier estimate, we he updated our report to include $40,000 for new equipment.
为什么?
这个句子需要进行修改以提高其清晰度和流畅度。首先,将"deciding to rescind the earlier estimate"放在句子的起始位置,这样可以明确表达决定取消之前的估计。其次,把"our report"放在动词"updated"之前,以确保主语和动词的紧密连接。最后,将"we"添加到句子中,以明确主语。修改后的句子为"Deciding to rescind our earlier estimate we updated our report to include $40000 for new equipment."
Deciding to rescind the earlier estimate our report was updated to include $40,000 for new equipment.” ---这个完全错误,因为主句和从句的主语不一致,那么就不能用ing形式。这样的话,你只能使用两个独立的句子表达这个意思。 Deciding to rescind our earlier estimate, we he updated our report to include $40,000 for new equipment.--而这个句子的主句和从句的主语都是“we”一致。故可以使用单词ing形式。